diff --git a/manual/source/web_remote.rst b/manual/source/web_remote.rst
index 6a44ab1..9d16fad 100644
--- a/manual/source/web_remote.rst
+++ b/manual/source/web_remote.rst
@@ -6,12 +6,10 @@ The Web Remote
 OpenLP gives you the ability to control the :ref:`creating_service`. You also 
 have the ability to search for and add or display media from the your 
 :ref:`media-manager` or send an :ref:`alerts`, using a remote computer, netbook 
-or smartphone and a web browser. You can use the web remote as an interface to 
-control the whole service away from the main computer or have the nursery or 
-daycare send an :ref:`alerts` message to the projection screen. This could also 
-be used for a guest speaker or worship team leader to control their own slides 
-if needed.
-
+or smartphone and a web browser. You can use the web remote to control the 
+entire service away from the main computer or, have the nursery or daycare send 
+an :ref:`alerts` message to the projection screen. This could also be used for a 
+guest speaker or worship team leader to control their own slides if needed.
 
 The first step is to make sure the Remote plugin is activated. You can accomplish
 this here: :ref:`plugin_list`. The second step is to configure the settings you